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Toby C, I think there is a lot of information on the article and for a beginner you may lose them so maybe present it in smaller parts will not lose them in the middle of the article. Your writing is good with a ton on info. What I like to see is you get small parts and making it very clear and easy to remember for the persons just starting.

You have a lot to offer them and you are important to them because you have all of this information that they can learn.